Further rewording ... it's getting better I think.

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@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@
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 <P>There is one additional clause:</P>\r
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-<P>All installed copies of Moodle on Internet web sites must retain the <BR>\r
-  "Made with Moodle" logo (or a visible equivalent) on the home page <BR>\r
-  as a link to moodle.com. If you wish to remove the logo or re-brand <BR>\r
-  this software as part of a commercial enterprise then please contact <BR>\r
-  martin@dougiamas.com to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
+<P>By default, installations of Moodle display a small acknowledgement <BR>\r
+   of Moodle on the home page with a link to moodle.com. If you wish to <BR>\r
+   remove this acknowledgement for the purpose of selling copies of this <BR>\r
+   software under a different brand then please contact martin@dougiamas.com<BR>\r
+   to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
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 <HR WIDTH="100%" SIZE="2"><BR>\r
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