MDL-11086 - more tweaks to helpfile as per Rays suggestions

merged from MOODLE_19_STABLE

diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/picture.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/picture.html
index 12ce8ab910d948aa19b6e937c0c317e4a49593ed..ad806f7c5340305aacbc4c2d6ea51c13e3ebbfe9 100644 (file)
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/picture.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/picture.html
@@ -3,14 +3,13 @@
 <p>You can upload a picture from your computer to this server, and this picture will be used in various places to represent you.</p>
 <p>For this reason, the best images to use are a close-up of your face, but you can use any image you like.</p>
 <p>The picture must be in JPG or PNG format (ie the names will usually end in .jpg or .png).</p>
-<p>You can get a picture file using one of four methods:</p>
-
+<p>You can get a picture file using a number of methods e.g.</p>
 <ol>
 <li>Using a digital camera, your photos will most likely already be on your computer in the right format.</li>
-<li>You can use a scanner to scan a printed photograph.  Make sure you save it as JPG or PNG format.</li>
+<li>You can use a scanner to scan a printed photograph to an image file.</li>
 <li>If you're artistic, you might draw a picture using a paint program.</li>
 </ol>
-
+<p>Whichever method you choose make sure the image file you want to use is in JPG or PNG format.</p>
 <p>To upload the image, click the "Browse" button on this editing page, and select the image from your hard disk.</p>
 <p>NOTE: Make sure that the file is not larger than the maximum size listed, or it will not be uploaded.</p>
 <p>Then click "Update my Profile" at the bottom - the image file will be cropped to a square and resized down to 100x100 pixels.</p>