Improved help file as per Ralf Hilgenstock's suggestion: http://moodle.org/mod/forum...

diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/quiz/overallfeedback.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/quiz/overallfeedback.html
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--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/quiz/overallfeedback.html
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@@ -4,10 +4,20 @@
 they have completed an attempt at the quiz. The text that is shown
 can depend on the grade the student got.</p>
 
-<p>For example, if you type "Well done" into the first feedback box, type 40% 
-in the first grade boundary box, and type "Please study this week's work again"
-in the second feedback box, then students who score 40% or better will see the 
-"Well done" message, and students who score less than 40% will see the other message.</p>
+<p>For example, if you enter:</p>
+
+<p>Grade boundary: 100%<br />
+Feedback: Well done<br />
+Grade boundary: 40%<br />
+Feedback: Please study this week's work again<br />
+...<br />
+Grade boundary: 0%</p>
+
+<p>Then students who score between 100% and 40% will see the 
+"Well done" message, and students who score between 39.99% and 0%
+will see the other message. That is, the grade boundaries define
+ranges of grades, and each feedback string is displayed to 
+scores within the appropriate range.</p>
 
 <p>The grade boundaries can be specified either as a percentage, for example "31.41%", or 
 as a number, for example "7". If your quiz is out of 10 marks, a grade boundary of 7 means