Rewritten for clarity

diff --git a/lang/en/docs/licence.html b/lang/en/docs/licence.html
index 07b961153c027cf5350f85116815fa22d72766b9..a29ee56c1e12277f98a57ebbe997ecc560fb6339 100644 (file)
--- a/lang/en/docs/licence.html
+++ b/lang/en/docs/licence.html
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@
   MERCHANTABILITY or FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE. See the<BR>\r
   GNU General Public License for more details (attached below).<BR>\r
 </P>\r
-<P>In addition to the rights under the GPL I am adding one clause:<BR>\r
-  <B>all installed and redistributed copies of Moodle must retain the <BR>\r
-  "Made with Moodle" logo on the home page (or a visible equivalent) <BR>\r
-  that links to moodle.com.</B>  If you wish to remove the logo, <BR>\r
-  re-brand Moodle, or redistribute modifed copies of Moodle then <BR>\r
-  please contact martin@dougiamas.com to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
+<P>There is one additional clause: <I>All installed and redistributed <BR>\r
+copies of Moodle must retain the "Made with Moodle" logo <BR>\r
+(or a visible equivalent) on the home page that links to moodle.com.</I><BR>\r
+If you wish to remove the logo, re-brand Moodle, or redistribute <BR>\r
+modifed copies of Moodle then please contact martin@dougiamas.com <BR>\r
+to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
 \r
 <HR WIDTH="100%" SIZE="2"><BR>\r
    \r

diff --git a/lang/en/moodle.php b/lang/en/moodle.php
index d5f7b88fe2f36e17a9578e232ffc9ab8112007b6..5292a4d41c9b95da02ba73808d6ca504f27ac2cd 100644 (file)
--- a/lang/en/moodle.php
+++ b/lang/en/moodle.php
@@ -209,12 +209,12 @@ GNU General Public License for more details:
 
 http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html
 
-In addition to the rights under the GPL I am adding one clause:
-all installed and redistributed copies of Moodle must retain the 
-\"Made with Moodle\" logo on the home page (or a visible equivalent)
-that links to moodle.com.  If you wish to remove the logo,
-re-brand Moodle, or redistribute modifed copies of Moodle then
-please contact martin@dougiamas.com to negotiate terms and pricing.";
+There is one additional clause: All installed and redistributed 
+copies of Moodle must retain the \"Made with Moodle\" logo 
+(or a visible equivalent) on the home page that links to moodle.com.
+If you wish to remove the logo, re-brand Moodle, or redistribute 
+modifed copies of Moodle then please contact martin@dougiamas.com 
+to negotiate terms and pricing.";
 
 $string['grade'] = "Grade";
 $string['grades'] = "Grades";