Simplified first paragraph and removed reference to teachers grading

assessments.

diff --git a/lang/en/help/workshop/agreeassessments.html b/lang/en/help/workshop/agreeassessments.html
index 14f82225bd170dc68d8c36f8218b6743ff576fe6..7b6ff9169b97184bd30fdf99d6c9c533f7c4b86c 100644 (file)
--- a/lang/en/help/workshop/agreeassessments.html
+++ b/lang/en/help/workshop/agreeassessments.html
@@ -3,14 +3,11 @@
 <p>A workshop assignment can have either of these characteristics:
 
 <ol>
-<li>In the submission and assessment phase when the students see the 
-       assessments made by other students there is no feedback 
+<li>In the submission and assessment phase the students see the 
+       assessments made by other students. There is no feedback 
        from the students who submitted the work to the students who made
-       the assessment. There may be feedback from the teacher if the teacher
-       chooses to grade the student assessments and then the teacher's grades and 
-       comments will be available to both the student whose work it is and 
-       to the student who made the assessment. There will be, however, 
-       be only one way feedback between peers on any one piece of work.
+       the assessment.  That is, there is only one way feedback between 
+    peers on any one piece of work.
        
 <li>In the submission and assessment phase the students see the 
        assessments made by other students and they are allowed to comment