Slight changes to the wording of this new stuff

diff --git a/lang/en/docs/licence.html b/lang/en/docs/licence.html
index a29ee56c1e12277f98a57ebbe997ecc560fb6339..77344b1b684e6862cbeba824ee771a9829e4bbe0 100644 (file)
--- a/lang/en/docs/licence.html
+++ b/lang/en/docs/licence.html
@@ -19,12 +19,17 @@
   MERCHANTABILITY or FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE. See the<BR>\r
   GNU General Public License for more details (attached below).<BR>\r
 </P>\r
-<P>There is one additional clause: <I>All installed and redistributed <BR>\r
-copies of Moodle must retain the "Made with Moodle" logo <BR>\r
-(or a visible equivalent) on the home page that links to moodle.com.</I><BR>\r
-If you wish to remove the logo, re-brand Moodle, or redistribute <BR>\r
-modifed copies of Moodle then please contact martin@dougiamas.com <BR>\r
-to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
+<P>Redistribution of modified copies of Moodle must be distributed <BR>\r
+  as pristine base sources plus patches, so that 'unofficial' changes<BR>\r
+  can be readily distinguished from the base source.</P>\r
+\r
+<P>There is one additional clause:</P>\r
+\r
+<P>All installed copies of Moodle on Internet web sites must retain the <BR>\r
+  "Made with Moodle" logo (or a visible equivalent) on the home page <BR>\r
+  as a link to moodle.com. If you wish to remove the logo or re-brand <BR>\r
+  this software as part of a commercial enterprise then please contact <BR>\r
+  martin@dougiamas.com to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
 \r
 <HR WIDTH="100%" SIZE="2"><BR>\r
    \r

diff --git a/lang/en/moodle.php b/lang/en/moodle.php
index 5292a4d41c9b95da02ba73808d6ca504f27ac2cd..560a90c003cdb493af88e19e26698deadc80a8ff 100644 (file)
--- a/lang/en/moodle.php
+++ b/lang/en/moodle.php
@@ -209,12 +209,17 @@ GNU General Public License for more details:
 
 http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html
 
-There is one additional clause: All installed and redistributed 
-copies of Moodle must retain the \"Made with Moodle\" logo 
-(or a visible equivalent) on the home page that links to moodle.com.
-If you wish to remove the logo, re-brand Moodle, or redistribute 
-modifed copies of Moodle then please contact martin@dougiamas.com 
-to negotiate terms and pricing.";
+Redistribution of modified copies of Moodle must be distributed 
+as pristine base sources plus patches, so that 'unofficial' changes
+can be readily distinguished from the base source.
+
+There is one additional clause:
+
+All installed copies of Moodle on Internet web sites must retain the 
+\"Made with Moodle\" logo (or a visible equivalent) on the home page 
+as a link to moodle.com. If you wish to remove the logo or re-brand 
+this software as part of a commercial enterprise then please contact 
+martin@dougiamas.com to negotiate terms and pricing.";
 
 $string['grade'] = "Grade";
 $string['grades'] = "Grades";