Even better :-)

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+++ b/lang/en/docs/licence.html
@@ -19,17 +19,14 @@
   MERCHANTABILITY or FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE. See the<BR>\r
   GNU General Public License for more details (attached below).<BR>\r
 </P>\r
+\r
 <P>Redistribution of modified copies of Moodle must be distributed <BR>\r
   as pristine base sources plus patches, so that 'unofficial' changes<BR>\r
-  can be readily distinguished from the base source.</P>\r
-\r
-<P>There is one additional clause:</P>\r
+  can be readily distinguished from the original Moodle code.</P>\r
 \r
-<P>By default, installations of Moodle display a small acknowledgement <BR>\r
-   of Moodle on the home page with a link to moodle.com. If you wish to <BR>\r
-   remove this acknowledgement for the purpose of selling copies of this <BR>\r
-   software under a different brand then please contact martin@dougiamas.com<BR>\r
-   to negotiate terms and pricing.</P>\r
+<P>If you wish to redistribute modified copies of this software <BR>\r
+  WITHOUT including or mentioning the original Moodle software <BR>\r
+  then please contact martin@dougiamas.com to request a commercial license.</P>\r
 \r
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