From: moodler <moodler>
Date: Mon, 21 Oct 2002 03:23:45 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Modified language so that it speaks to students as well as teachers
X-Git-Url: http://git.mjollnir.org/gw?a=commitdiff_plain;h=7bcb78cee36052a6d07f83d602056c34478c3507;p=moodle.git

Modified language so that it speaks to students as well as teachers
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diff --git a/lang/en/help/mods.html b/lang/en/help/mods.html
index 0d0ceb0ac1..7f75d64439 100644
--- a/lang/en/help/mods.html
+++ b/lang/en/help/mods.html
@@ -24,10 +24,10 @@
 
 <P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/resource/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Resources</B></P>
 <UL>
-<P>Resources are content: information you want to bring into the 
-   course.  These can be prepared files you've uploaded to the course 
-   server; pages you edit directly in Moodle; or simply links to 
-   external web pages that appear within this course.</P>
+<P>Resources are content: information the teacher wants to bring into the 
+   course.  These can be prepared files uploaded to the course 
+   server; pages edited directly in Moodle; or external web pages
+   made to appear part of this course.</P>
 </UL>
 
 <P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/assignment/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Assignments</B></P>
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 
 <P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/quiz/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Quizzes</B></P>
 <UL>
-<P>This module allows you to design and set quiz tests, consisting of 
+<P>This module allows the teacher to design and set quiz tests, consisting of 
    multiple choice, true-false, and short answer questions.  These 
    questions are kept in a categorised database, and can be re-used
    within courses and even between courses.  Quizzes can allow 
@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@
 
 <P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/choice/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Choices</B></P>
 <UL>
-<P>A choice activity is very simple - you ask a question and specify a 
+<P>A choice activity is very simple - the teacher asks a question and specifies a 
    choice of multiple responses.  It can be useful as a quick poll to 
-   stimulate thinking about a topic, or to allow the class to vote on 
-   a direction for the course, or to gather research consent.
+   stimulate thinking about a topic; to allow the class to vote on 
+   a direction for the course; or to gather research consent.
 </UL>
 
 <P><IMG VALIGN=absmiddle SRC="<?=$CFG->wwwroot?>/mod/survey/icon.gif">&nbsp;<B>Surveys</B></P>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 <P>The Survey module provides a number of verified survey instruments that
    have been found useful in assessing and stimulating learning in 
    online environments.  Teachers can use these to gather data from their
-   students that will help them learn about their classs and reflect 
+   students that will help them learn about their class and reflect 
    on their own teaching.</P>
 </UL>