From: moodler <moodler>
Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2006 08:55:34 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: SOme help file polishing
X-Git-Url: http://git.mjollnir.org/gw?a=commitdiff_plain;h=d95f4c3fefe70abee3d690c170babf2f3dded315;p=moodle.git

SOme help file polishing
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diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/comments.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/comments.html
index 0b383a035c..06b808ce5a 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/comments.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/comments.html
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <p align="center"><strong>Allow Comments</strong></p>
 
-<p>Can users make comments on the entries while viewing them.</p>
+<p>You can allow users to make comments on each entry.</p>
 
diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/fields.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/fields.html
index 93e28ca733..ae26e60713 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/fields.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/fields.html
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <p align="center"><strong>Fields</strong></p>
 
-<p>On this screen you can select the fields that will be a part of your database.
-   The field types are pluggable.</p>
+<p>On this screen you can create the fields that will be a part of your database.</p>
+
+<p>Each field allows different types of data, with different interfaces.</p>
 
diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/importcsv.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/importcsv.html
index eb552112fb..3e16b8d06c 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/importcsv.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/importcsv.html
@@ -22,5 +22,4 @@
 </pre>
 </p>
 
-<p>In the initial version of this script, only simple field types are supported, but 
-   support for all field types will be added.</p>
+<p>Warning: all field types may not be supported</p>
diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/maxentries.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/maxentries.html
index bd9113fcf4..48152e3f82 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/maxentries.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/maxentries.html
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <p align="center"><strong>Maximum Entries</strong></p>
 
-<p>The maximum number of entries a participant can submit for this activity</p>
+<p>The maximum number of entries a participant can submit for this activity.</p>
 
diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/participants.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/participants.html
index 66c148c76c..0295bbb02e 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/participants.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/participants.html
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 <p align="center"><strong>Participants</strong></p>
 
-<p>Who can add entries to this database? This does not restrict who can view entries</p>
+<p>This setting allows you to restrict who can add entries to this database. It does not affect who can read the entries.</p>
 
diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requireapproval.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requireapproval.html
index 1ac9d4f363..2919aa09e9 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requireapproval.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requireapproval.html
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <p align="center"><strong>Require Approval</strong></p>
 
-<p>Should entries be approved by a teacher before they are viewable to students. This is useful
+<p>Should entries be approved by a teacher before they are viewable to students? This is useful
    for moderating content that may be potentially offensive or inappropriate.</p>
 
diff --git a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requiredentries.html b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requiredentries.html
index c9b70eafc8..8739e132b9 100644
--- a/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requiredentries.html
+++ b/lang/en_utf8/help/data/requiredentries.html
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 <p>The number of entries a participant is required to submit.
    Users will see a reminder message displayed while viewing if they have not submitted the required number of entries.</p>
 
-<p>Also the activity will not be considered complete until the user has submitted the required number of entries</p>
+<p>The activity will not be considered complete until the user has submitted the required number of entries</p>